Rope setup at the top

Hey everyone.  I am pretty new and I wanted to know if this setup seams reasonable for the rope to be set up at the top when you want to do a lap.  Thanks!

Looks too complicated. If I'm seeing things correctly you have 2 extendable quickdraws still short and then 2 more which are extended. The 2 that are extended don't look like they're doing anything and are not necessary. 

2 quickdraws opposite and opposed are good enough. If you're really worried you can make one/both locker draws.

Looks somewhat messy, I have difficult time figuring out what is going on 

Here is what a typical TR sport anchor would look like - the top two setups

https://www.karstendelap.com/blog/sport-climbing-anchors-which-set-up-is-best 

One "modification" that I would suggest - use steel lockers/carabiners for TR anchor, there will be less wear on them, the rope will be cleaner. If full steel is too heavy, Edelrid has 'bulletproof' series of carabiners with steel inserts

It looks like the carabiners of the lower alpines are clipped to each other and the rope? They also don't appear to be opposite and opposed.

Fix these two issues and remove the extended alpines and you're good

Edit: on a second look it seems as though the carabiners are not clipped to each other, just crossed weird

Barney Whitewrote:

Hey everyone.  I am pretty new and I wanted to know if this setup seams reasonable for the rope to be set up at the top when you want to do a lap.  Thanks!

Just the two draws would be fine.

As others said the long draws aren’t necessary but if you are going to use them, shorten them up by taking a few wraps around the biner. You want to avoid the way that lower biner is going to be cross loaded. Make sure the biners at the rope end have gates opposed. 

demein priest wrote:

I have looked at both sources, and a bunch more. But always nice to get some confimation that the setup makes sense, and was hoping some input on second device, but will check out the mountainproject as gunkiemike adviced.

Three bots in one thread! Impressive.  The above was quoted as the most egregious.

FrankPSwrote:

Three bots in one thread! Impressive.  The above was quoted as the most egregious.

I don’t know, the “mamir ripley” one actually sounds like a bot is trolling, so that may qualify as even more egregious. 

phylp phylpwrote:

I don’t know, the “mamir ripley” one actually sounds like a bot is trolling, so that may qualify as even more egregious. 

A trolling bot? Clever.

I'd like to see one bot calling out another. "You phony!" That would be ironic. :)

FrankPSwrote:

Three bots in one thread! Impressive.  The above was quoted as the most egregious.

Ah, that explains it. I scrolled up and down the thread to see what specifically I had "adviced" (sic).